Before and After: Vita e Bella by Amy

BEFORE:  Well, I kind of dropped the ball, (hey, give me a break, this was one of my first crititques!  I didn't have my routine down yet! lol So I missed the shot! :(

 AFTER:

Note the little changes: tabs under the header, cleaner print on tagline, an About Me paragraph under the profile and further down, a cloud of tags, shortened blog entries with jump breaks. Also, Amy had begun working on making changes WHILE I was writing her critique, so when I first saw Amy's blog, it had a different background, among other things!